The first impression I got from this was "agh! you're making rikku look like a club slut!" upon further examination, I think it has something to do with the eye angle and her lips. Plus, I'm pretty sure she has an actual neck, not a stick with skin on it (I know that sounded jerkish, but that's what I got out of it). everything apart from the head looks fine.
Very nice, I'm still a little uneducated on the whole ooekaki thing, But this won me over with the way she is drawn accurately, and kinda like the anime-style artwork I've sometimes seen from the original FF artists. The pose is lovely too
Great googly moogly! -This- is oekaki? Like online drawing board, usuallu done in a speedy manner? I'm humbled. Great work, really! Although her pupils seem a little to normal, and not swirly... But that's picking at nits.
Brava! Keep it up!